superpimplol's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[headman: the series]

a little advice if u want it

the reason i gave u 10 is to be the 1'st to have a good review about u i see in the banna part of the movie it was the best because u actually shown u learnt a few things about flash (back grounds) tween etc. so so far ur on the right track of learning flash the only 3 things i say u could improve on is animating a walk cycle on the character there is a few good flashs on here that teachs that type walk cycles in the search newgrounds box and u should get a few add more character in ur character u can show this by the way his facial expressions are wether his walk is a vibrant happy walk or a life less walk make story boards on paper before u create flash so u know what ur goal in ur flash is going to be and u will find it extremley easier if u do this i think ur character is as u said ''simplistic'' but u can change it a little to make it simplistic yet looks great so i would say do what u want with characters just do what i said above make them have purpose the chainsaw part of the movie felt like i was watching a motion tween and a few frames of blood this is good for learning ur self but not really good for posting on newgrounds since most of the people here are very closed in helping new people as ur self so keep making flash and learn at least 2 things from each flash u make and u should be alright good luck in the future ;)

p.s
i am not trying to offend u just give u a little help as well as a good review

meneerken-retteketet responds:

thanks dude, i always appreciate the comments of people who are drunk, especially when i'm drunk myself, which most certainly is the case right now.
Thx for the nice and helpfull review, it made me feel kinda good about myself :)

[K4 DVD]

it was okay but...

i seen alot of good art work in there but what really let the whole movie down was the stick men and animation with them you have alot of good potensiol in art i could see by the 3d programs i had flashmx and know it's hard but sticks suck unless u can get the movement right and all other aspects i would tell u a web site and no this is not a lame outwar adress (does my head in) this is so u can see how the movies with sticks works better
www.stickdeatn.com remove N put a H look at this if u want to continue with sticks

johnm831 responds:

Thanks for your advice. I've already heard of stickdeath, everyone's heard of sd.com. I like their games a LOT, but their actual animations aren't that interesting or special (no offense to the almighty creator of the stickdeath genre).
Aaaaanyway, I've developed a new animation technique, with much smoother animation. Will post details and a preview within the next week.